Chữa bài IELTS Task 1
The chart represents the percentages of people who obtained different types of academic degree education, divided by genders, in Australia, 1999. It is clearly seen that the most common qualifications that Australian women gain was ‘Skilled vocational diploma’, whereas men had a stronger tendency to get an undergraduate diploma.
According to the data, over 90 per cent women had successfully completed ‘Skilled vocational diploma’, the highest amongst all academic qualifications. In contrast, the most uncommon degree for women was undergraduate, with only around 37 per cent proceeding to this degree.
Men, however, showed a totally contrast pattern as they topped the chart for undergraduate degree, with almost three quarters of all respondents reaching this level. Whilst only a tenth of them stopped at ‘Skilled vocational diploma’.
Another interesting feature was that the academic level of bachelor was where the statistics for both genders most harmonized with one another, with 52% for men and 45% for women achieving this degree.
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