• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • ltlinh2809

      Participant
      August 21, 2017 at 8:08 pm

      Topic: Research has shown that overrating is as harmful as smoking. Therefore, the advertising of certain food products should be banned in the same way as the advertising of cigarette is banned. Do you agree or disagree?
      Consuming too much food could cause damage to human health just like smoking; therefore government should impose a prohibition on the advertisement of both food and smoking. In my opinion, the former view is well- founded, however the latter one seems to be rather unreasonable.
      On the one hand, consuming on unnecessarily amount of foods could have adverse impacts on human health condition. Firstly, eating too much would lead to gain excessive amount of weight, which results in a drop in the confidence in people’s images. As a consequence, they tend to response to such feeling by depriving themselves of foods which leads to gain more weight and potentially results in obesity. Secondly, excessive unhealthy food intake such as junk food and processed food can put people at stake of developing health – related problems like blood sugar or cholesterol blood. Issues regarding people’s state health have been caused by overrating is for sure comparable to those by smoking, lung cancer for example.
      On the other hand, I suppose that implementing a ban on advertisement of several particular foods is not always the effective mean to hamper overrating. Advertising acts as the main solution way in delivering tempting messages as well as persuasive arguments to stimulate the sales in the market. Forbidding public marketing campaigns like advertising might push a vast number of companies in foods and beverage sector to the verge of bankruptcy. Furthermore, it is clear that customers rarely rely on solely advertisement as a source of information before deciding what products to buy. Instead, they use multiple information sources that are supplementary such as family, friends, internet and so forth, which proves that advertising of not playing a decisive role in purchasing.
      In conclusion, I agree that both smoking and overrating have brought negative effects to human’s health conditions, whereas, it seems to me that advertisement of certain foodstuffs should not be banned.

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      August 24, 2017 at 12:38 am

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