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01 Dollar IELTS Writing Correction Service – Submit your Writing here
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01 Dollar IELTS Writing Correction Service – Submit your Writing here

tranthihonggam80
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February 26, 2020 at 8:05 pm
[20:05:43, 26/2/2020] Cám ơn các bạn!
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March 7, 2020 at 9:07 pm
Hi bạn
Bài của bạn có chỗ idea bị trùng, có chỗ chưa giải thích rõ ràng và không thể hiện đủ ý trong mở bài. Phần từ vựng, nhất là các từ liên kết câu còn bị informal. Bạn xem phần nhận xét của mình và sửa lại nha.
Chúc bạn học tốt!
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