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  • Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • phunghongthai

      Participant
      August 22, 2019 at 9:55 am

      The world faces many serious problems from climate change, economic crisis, and poverty to political instability among many others.
      Which problem do you believe is the most important for all people to work on? In other words, which one should receive the most attention and investment in 2012? Why? Give clear reasons for your answer.

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      Task 10: Write an essay on the topic below.
      The essay should be about 250 to 300 words long. You have 50 minutes to plan it and to write it.

      TOPIC:
      The world faces many serious problems from climate change, economic crisis, and poverty to political instability among many others.
      Which problem do you believe is the most important for all people to work on? In other words, which one should receive the most attention and investment in 2012? Why? Give clear reasons for your answer.
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      Ngày nay thế giới đối mặt với rất nhiều vấn đề nghiêm trọng, từ việc thay đổi khí hậu, suy thoái kinh tế, nghèo khổ và sự ổn định chính trị giữa rất nhiều vấn đề khác. Vấn đề nào bạn nghĩ là quan trọng nhất đối với tất cả mọi người cùng chung sức. Nói một cách khác vấn đề nào nhận được sự quan tâm nhất vào năm 2012? Tại sao? Đưa các lý do cho câu trả lời của bạn.

      It is true that in many serious issues which the world faces every day, I believe that economy crisis is the most important factor that has strong and deep impact to the other problems. In 2012, the world economy was continuous crisis-ridden that beginning from 2009 as a result of American real estate policy.
      In the one hand, there are two main reasons in order to state economy is the most important than the other such as environment, political stability. Firstly, in many countries the government had to change in the sort period however the economic and society remained constant. For example, in Thailand within 5 years from 2008 to 2011 the prime minister was changed 5 times but Thailand’s economic growth rate was higher than that of Viet Nam. Furthermore, the strategy of any governments or parties always desire leading country to the higher position than the other country also bring liberty, high income and happiness to all citizens. Governments has to solve all problems such as environment, poverty and so on. However the most priority is economic development.
      In the other hand, economic crisis was unexpected even, there are many reasons why the crisis happened and a lot of negative effects to society. Starting first with lowering the interest rate by the Federal Reserve which later resulted in the financial crisis. Besides, many companies were merged or bankrupt, and also there was decline significantly in the most of production and retail system. For example, in China more than 10 million migrant workers lost their jobs. In the meantime, unemployment’s rates in the US also “shot up to 7.2% in December from its recent low of 4.4% in March 2007
      From what has been discussed above, I can draw the conclusion that numerous governments and international financial organizations should to work together to cross over this globe economic crisis and restrict in financial management.

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      August 23, 2019 at 5:08 pm

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